Sunday, January 27, 2013

Fiction #2: Dis(Order)




{In this piece, I attempted to write a creation myth for a civilization with an undisclosed name and setting.  I was inspired by the stories we have been reading in my Greek Mythology class, but realized how difficult the task would be as soon as I began.}

We were a people founded on the ideal that one’s worth is determined by his capacity to create.  Before the land came to be inhabited by flora and fauna, the earth was a tumultuous mass of raw material—a disorderly amalgamation of the elements floating through a void without direction.  Observing this disarray were spirits intent on giving it form.  The first artisans, their medium was chaos, their product the functioning world we inhabit.   

The artisans’ work was purely kinetic and ever changing.  Once they linked the elements into a solid mass, they sculpted its surface to display a multitude of landscapes and painted them with the purest of colors.  But once it was shaped, they did not leave the world to sit motionless in space.  The earth would be as futile stagnant as it was when drifting through nothingness in fragments.  The artisans infused the world with a life force, a spirit.  It breathed and changed face with the seasons, which the artisans created to institute change periodically.  Then the artisans released rain, wind, and fire into the world to further enforce that cycle.
Satisfied with their work, they wished to share it.  The artisans crafted the animals and lowered them to the earth in the palms of their hands.  Beasts and all things that crawled, slithered, or flew inhabited the environment that was most suitable for their nature.  While such creatures were beautiful, their mental capacity was limited and they were oblivious to how they emerged on the earth and who placed them there.  The artisans were egotistical and wanted recognition from cognizant beings other than themselves.    
Humans descended to the earth in the manner of the animals, but we were imbued with the same ability to reason and to create possessed by the artisans.  Our potential was limited compared to the artisans, however, because our creators had considered the risks of making people as powerful as themselves.  Such action could threaten their proficiency in regulating the cosmos and cause the world to return to its previous state of unrestrained chaos.  For the moment there was balance.
When we were first lowered into the atmosphere, we did not forget to look up to where we came from and smile with appreciation.  We were grateful.  As a sign of our gratitude, we resolved to emulate those that gave us life.  Around us was a seemingly infinite supply of resources with which to create, but we used only enough materials to hone our skills and please our inventive predecessors.  Naturally humans were an omnivorous species that needed to ingest considerable amounts of meat and plant matter to survive, but what we consumed we tried to match with what we produced.  All for the sake of balance.  In the beginning, this ideal was at the forefront of our minds.  All for the sake of balance.
As our civilization became more structured we appointed leaders—the older, more wise among us—to overlook daily proceedings.  They in turn assigned roles to each member of society based on the skills they exhibited.  While the refinement of our society required the performance of particular tasks to ensure stability, each citizen was expected to devote a sufficient sum of their time to producing art.  
Some collected the ashes from our fires, mixed them with water, and smeared the solution on the walls of our caves, depicting our origin and the events of everyday life.  Similar themes were painted on the interior and exterior of shelters as our laborers experimented with building materials.  Some fashioned string from animal hair and reeds and affixed the bones of their prey into organic jewelry.  Some molded mud into storage vessels and struck rock with denser stones to carve sculptures from the surfaces.  Some were more inclined to craft stories with their voice, weaving tales of how the world came to be and how we spawned from the artisans. These were ways in which we explored our identity, and they were ideal forms of expression when the whole of our people lived in close quarters.
Eventually people began to measure their work against others, and competition arose to decide which form of art was more practical, more in tune with who we were.  We placed more emphasis on outshining our peers than pleasing the artisans, and lost sight of our origin.  Disagreement became so severe that our people split into factions and established new governing bodies within each.  The elders’ influence deteriorated until several of these groups split from the community entirely, venturing off into distant lands to find new homesteads and begin anew.  Who is to say when the artisans will intercede to unite our people as they did the physical world?

Fiction #1: Sal Be Gone



Mom had sent me to retrieve Uncle Sal from the basement.  The party upstairs was for him, after all.
Sal perched atop the basement dryer.  He hunched his back in solitude. Light crept in between shrubs and fell through a small window in narrow streams on his mirthless figure. In the dim lighting, he resembled a wayward monk who had spent too many years bowed in unanswered prayer and could no longer look up. 
            He didn’t acknowledge me coming down the stairs, didn’t even react when I stopped at the base without a word of greeting. His head remained slack, collapsed before him.  I leaned over and cocked my head to the side, trying to determine if he was conscious.  His eyes were open.  Fixed on a deerskin-bound pocket journal he clasped with both hands in his lap.  Was he protecting its contents?  The cover was worn, discolored with dirt and plant matter and blotches of what appeared to be blood.
            The furnace clicked on.   
            Suddenly I was glad that I had stopped at the bottom of the stairs and not continued towards him.  I looked back to the door I came from.           

He stumbled up the cobblestone drive in the rain.  Grams, currently occupying the guestroom, opened the door to a shabby man clad in a torn up windbreaker and threadbare boots.  Disheveled locks and an unkempt beard created a gnarly shadowbox around his face.  Lips were severely chapped, lacerations glistened in the rain, exhausted eyes gazed into hers.  She nearly left the bum to the elements when he spoke and she recognized him.
            The prodigal son had returned.
            When Sal disappeared four months before, his only farewell was a pharmacy receipt for Lomotil and a Z-Pak left on his pillow with “I’m going where I can’t be found.  Don’t look” scrawled on the back.  His wife discovered the note in their downtown flat three days after the purchase date printed on the receipt.  She spent most of her nights in a motel, and likely returned to her skid row clients that night.
            Naturally, Grams let him in and notified the rest of the family, but we quickly realized that, besides his appearance, something was amiss. 
            “Sa—Sal, everyone’s won—wondering where you are,” I stammered.
            He looked at me.  He stood up.  Sighed.  Setting the journal on the dryer behind him, he wiped his fingers on his flannel shirt and approached me, side-stepped passed me, climbed the stairs. Before reaching the door he muttered, “Those bastards and their fake lives.  What steeping shit do they give if one of their own is missing?  One less distraction from their paychecks and million-dollar sleep quarters.”
            Before I could respond, he vanished upstairs.  I didn’t follow.  My eyes were fixed on the journal.   All the time he spent in hiatus, no word of where he was or why he had left.  Now back, he hid in the darkness of the basement?  That journal must have had answers.
            I pried my right foot from the bottom stair, let it drop to the floor, repeated with the left.  Half way across the room I turned to look back up at the door.  No one there.  I was alone.  Temporarily undiscovered.  I crossed the final eight feet. 
            The journal rested before me, its full form materialized completely now that I was directly in front of it.  Crude stitches of twine kept ordinary lined notebook paper fixed to hand-cut deerskin.  The cover was plain, no leather thong holding it closed, nothing etched into the hide.  No need for a title when the earthen tints evoked multiple stories on their own.  I pulled back the front flap, flakes of dried blood falling to the floor, unsettled.
            Finally escaped.  Dodged that pitiful excuse for society and am finally where they cannot reach me.  I will start over, just me.  No betrayal, no work but what is necessary to survive.  I will be self-sufficient. . .  
            Found a cave.  Seems abandoned. Call in from the entrance, shine light into darkness.  Back wall is visible, no movement.  Will set up camp, take shelter. . .
            Built fire.  Matches running low. . .   
            Set traps outside of cave, will try to catch first meal in wild. . .
            Success! Caught marmot.  Roasting on fire.  Hot meal for free. . .
            Exploring area in day time.  Seems reasonably secluded.  Only traces of hunting parties long passed. . .
            Plane circled overhead.  Dove for bush to avoid discovery.  Branches cut my face.  . . 
Bathed in nearby spring.  Had not shaved since departure.  Have lost track of days. Reflection in water horrendous.  Tried to at least wash away grime.  Lay down on the bank, closed my eyes.  Thought I heard singing.  Cannot find anyone. . .
            Stumbled on deer carcass.  Shot in the neck.  Bled out.  Meat is rotten.  Will cut skin and dry, use for warmth and new binding for journal.  Old one falling apart. . .
            Raining fiercely outside.  Wind blew out fire.  Cannot resuscitate.  Had to move sleeping bag to opposite wall.  East side slopes from mouth, water creeping down in thin streams.  Small pond gathering at back of cave.  Nowhere to exit.  Thunder.  Lightning strikes along tree line.  Fear cave will asphyxiate and spew me out into rain. . .
            Made it through storm.  Cannot believe it. . .        
            Winter approaching.   Few animals in sight.  Too tired to hunt.  Food source dwindling more by the day. Cannot survive. . .
             



Saturday, January 12, 2013

Critique of Weldon's "Résumé for a Lamp"



By personifying a commonplace household appliance, further amplifying "Lamp's" identity by removing the definite article, "Résumé for a Lamp" successfully causes the reader to look at an otherwise unexceptional item in a different light.  This effect is especially apparent when Lamp is portrayed as a nine month precursor to a midwife, a cognizant being capable of going to college, and a world traveler. Where articles and even subjects of sentences have been eliminated, the piece not only reads like the résumé it claims to be, but could also pass for a stylized Craiglist ad with its very specific purchase history.
                Weldon undermines the conventional résumé as well.  Some sentences are fragmented, short, and to the point as would be expected, while others are lengthened and have narrative qualities.  There is no mention of potential “employment” or a prospective buyer.  Where the average résumé will only include an applicant’s experience, skills, and other qualifications, Lamp’s shortcomings are likewise exposed: its initial bulbs are replaced for being annoyingly bright, it is stolen at an in-house charity event, and it is described as a rebel when it short circuits.
                Specific events in Lamp’s life are highlighted, but the chronological order is skewed and the occurrences are not written in their actual succession.  The action randomly transitions between Lamp’s production, its first owner (the Patriarch), its current residence, and everything in the middle.  The tense also tends to shift abruptly, without any compliance with whether events are taking place now or in the past.